First Draft of Website with Feedback

First Draft:



https://epilkington08.wixsite.com/nishagandhimusic


Feedback:

- On the Equilibrium album which appears, change the song colour to white with a possible drop shadow. I will also change these in the merchandise page as the image of the cover needs to be consistent.


- On my paragraphs of text (in biography), make the first letter larger, like a drop cap.


- Need to change the audio of the interview video as it is very windy. I may have to retake in a less windy location. Once I have done that I may add a quiet soundtrack.


- I will contextualise my gallery image of the male character in my music video, so it directs users to watch him in the music video. I may do this through labelling the photos.


- Check the spelling on the Rolling Stones quote.


- Retake the photo with the sign of discrimination as it is spelt wrong.


- In my #LGBTQ+ section I need to ask the audience a to support a specific cause so that there is an aspect in my video which the audience can engage with.
- I also need to resize the images in my gallery.

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